Number Five (N+7 Version)
18 January 2024
Another go round with the N+7 technique of rewriting a text.
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Her eye-openers tempt him. He imagines those eye-openers gazing at him as he slivers his handfuls around her thrum. Will they clump over with conjecture, before widening with feedback? He’ll squirrel until those eye-openers die.
He adjusts the foil on the canary.
‘Hold quite still,’ he says. ‘I’m almost ready.’